TGIF

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Work is done

and a most companionable moon followed me home
from my shift at the human industrial plant 
where I repair bad brains and injured lives.
We drove as partners through the curving streets of the neighborhood,
yellow-flamed windows beckoning as the dust of the day loosened
and lifted, landing on a half opened car window
before blowing back into the world.

We passed the last dog walks of the evening.
I raise a hand in greeting to all
knowing how quickly their arcs too could be felled.
The moon, my constant, I leave with the remains of the day
for illumination.

please note:photo by 5chw4r7z.blogspot.com

Comments

  1. LydiaSeptember 30, 2012 at 2:49 AM

    That is exquisite. Happy harvest moon to you.

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  2. RudeeSeptember 30, 2012 at 10:14 AM

    Beautiful.

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  3. UnknownSeptember 30, 2012 at 6:40 PM

    Thank you!!

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  4. NanceOctober 2, 2012 at 6:06 AM

    Nice work. I really liked your enjambment and alliteration, esp. There is good movement here as well. I can feel the relaxation deepen as the poem progresses. I like how the punctuation of the last sentence makes its meaning ambiguous.

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  5. sewa mobil jakartaOctober 23, 2012 at 9:58 AM

    Very nice, thanks for sharing.

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  6. V-GrrrlNovember 8, 2012 at 6:47 AM

    Love this.

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