worst lines runner up

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Bulwer-Lytton Fiction Contest
Runner-Up, 2008

"Hmm . . ." thought Abigail as she gazed languidly from the veranda past the bright white patio to the cerulean sea beyond, where dolphins played and seagulls sang, where splashing surf sounded like the tintinnabulation of a thousand tiny bells, where great gray whales bellowed and the sunlight sparkled off the myriad of sequins on the flyfish's bow ties, "time to get my meds checked."
--Andrew Bowers


How often have I thought the very same thing?

Comments

  1. RudeeMarch 3, 2009 at 8:20 PM

    Nah. She just needed to take off her rose colored glasses.

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  2. English RiderMarch 3, 2009 at 9:18 PM

    Yep, pretty bad, Smileworthy.

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  3. AnonymousMarch 3, 2009 at 10:24 PM

    That's cool.

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  4. jivaMarch 3, 2009 at 10:45 PM

    That's why she needed to get her meds checked.

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  5. PTA Transit AuthorityMarch 4, 2009 at 5:17 AM

    Congratulations on being chosen a "Blog of Note".

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  6. Tales From The InkMarch 4, 2009 at 6:02 AM

    Well, go ahead and treat yourself to a lost thought or two.

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  7. AnonymousMarch 4, 2009 at 7:41 AM

    your blog and photos are so nice
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  8. AnonymousMarch 4, 2009 at 8:41 AM

    That has to be the longest running sentence ever. If I could see all this I would want to stay exactly as I was. Keep those meds the same.

    Coco

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  9. NanceMarch 4, 2009 at 1:29 PM

    You know, I entered this contest once--yes, on purpose--and I still have my entry. I thought about giving it a go one more time.

    Maybe I'll run a shadow contest on my blog....

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